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    Quote Originally Posted by luka View Post
    That's the spirit! At least someone's still got a pulse!
    That was created by an AI that had been trained on Buzzfeed headlines. There is some gold in there.
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    To gain POWER one must be fatally compromised, i.e. in a position of weakness
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    Humans have been conditioned to worship the holographic deception and the agents that perpetuate it.
    I found out I can confuse them by thinking random thoughts and by doing random math in my head. They don't like it when I do that.
    All this information is objective & can be found by anyone travelling to a specific 'library' level of consciousness called Level 27
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    This pops into my head everytime I see this thread title.


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    Memory frame. Time reprisal. Sclerotic paste van
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    Comfort as permanent condition. Queer node
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    pit probe against lode unleash the thunderbolt
    loop back to first time, shocked and gasping at
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    repetition, forlorn knowing its gone for good.
    Rejig the remaining pieces. Make do
    with what you have.

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    Distant cousin twice removed heresy by hearsay the crevice is ventured
    But never gained. Repast is a perfunctory affair. Feeling a dull ache in
    the neck, a sure symptom of displaced guilt.
    Now is never the right time.

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    i'm also too shy for this topic but wanted to say i came across a very nice word yesterday that i had never heard of but forgot already. it's a synonym for something like a spear and it ends on -atl. if i were a poem i would definitely want it to be part of me

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    Quote Originally Posted by yyaldrin View Post
    i'm also too shy for this topic but wanted to say i came across a very nice word yesterday that i had never heard of but forgot already. it's a synonym for something like a spear and it ends on -atl. if i were a poem i would definitely want it to be part of me
    Quetzacoatl?

    No, found it: atlatl
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spear-thrower

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    Quote Originally Posted by HMGovt View Post
    Quetzacoatl?

    No, found it: atlatl
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spear-thrower
    atlatl! yes! interesting that i couldn't remember it cos its the exact same three letters repeated. my poem will have the word atlatl.

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    Quote Originally Posted by luka View Post
    Bridge and road infrastructure ploughshare cantilever arch cable
    hung glance slice at intersection slice at event locus pang radium
    chemical harm Sino-Russo treaty cover detonation pact alarm
    concrete reinforcement rod counterfeit faction error at negotiation
    stable.
    i like this one the most

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    DRAFT 1: Fixed grin on your Butter Bill
    Six digits webbed on palmate feet
    Plumage shaded pleats grey frills
    Like snow absorbing balls of sleet

    DRAFT 65:
    Bright orange bill
    Blood orange feet
    White plume pleats short shadow frills
    Muddied snow becoming sleet.

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    I've revised the above approximately 12 times not even joking

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    It's pretty shit

    I thought shadowed frills was quite good but they don't look like frills do they

    More like cloud formations

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    20+ revisions

    It's fun playing around with this, meaningless as it is
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    i'm no native english speaker so please don't flame me. here is my poem called "the rattle"

    the rattle

    rattle, kettle, atlatl
    otter, ochre, october
    weather, leather, feather


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