Luka's Wonderful Poetry Thread
sadmanbarty
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that's not allowed on this thread.
sadmanbarty
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one thing i would say luke is that you're going to get more engagement if you only post one a day.
luka
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Yes but this is for archival purposes. It guards against fire theft and flooding
luka
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Clanking dialectic
makes it simple
in between
everything else occurs.
Real or not,
here it is.
The winds converge
It happens all at once
that means
there’s no start point
and nothing without
watching,
and unacted on. The effects
move backwards too
and at a distance.
It’s complicated. We
don’t need to touch
to touch.
The real is
black carrier bags in the branches
and dog shit inside them
and the greasy shapes
on the train windows,
where heads rested.
Mementos of earthly acts,
History, is what hangs around,
It’s all over the place.
The real
flares up
in the darkness,
the muggy black
our brains rattle in.
makes it simple
in between
everything else occurs.
Real or not,
here it is.
The winds converge
It happens all at once
that means
there’s no start point
and nothing without
watching,
and unacted on. The effects
move backwards too
and at a distance.
It’s complicated. We
don’t need to touch
to touch.
The real is
black carrier bags in the branches
and dog shit inside them
and the greasy shapes
on the train windows,
where heads rested.
Mementos of earthly acts,
History, is what hangs around,
It’s all over the place.
The real
flares up
in the darkness,
the muggy black
our brains rattle in.
yyaldrin
in je ogen waait de wind
at the risk of sounding stupid or maybe even insulting. do you sometimes put down words "without thinking"? i mean, there is thinking going on, but it is unconscious so to say. i'm asking this because this is how i feel when i draw, and that often, its meaning or "picture" forms only after completing the drawing.
luka
Well-known member
These ones there's not much getting bogged down in thought
