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  1. #466
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    It'll seem like I'm lying now but that's actually what I thought you might be going for there. But then I thought that might be me being stupid or something and I decided not to comment.

    I have a tendency to see poems as something visually arranged rather than as a sort of script for ... would you say oration? So when I see poems

    arranged like
    this I
    tend to
    assume that the poet is just being
    a bit
    wanky

    So thanks for correcting that assumption.

    I've never learned about poetry and I only recently started enjoying it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Corpsey View Post
    'He wore his heart on his sleeve didnít he?
    He fooled Jimmy ĎFive Belliesí into
    scoffing cat shit,
    sneaked it
    into
    a
    mince
    pie,
    DIDNíT HE
    THAT WAS FUNNY'



    Please explain why you
    do
    that
    with
    words

    IS IT A JOKE?
    I used to like how polystyle_desu's posts were always formatted a bit like avant-garde poetry.

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    i dont think anyone here would be that interested but yesterday i wrote a long (3000 word) poem on the materials of london. the actual physical substance of the place just as that gets replaced and superimposed over by 'new london'
    it's probably a but long to post here but you can read it here

    http://miracleinvasion.blogspot.co.u...gb-x-none.html

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    You should all be interested, it's fantastic.

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    can you add some pretty pictures and some sort of call to action at the bottom and then i'll be interested

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    pictures would be good.

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    theres a section on corner shops i need to put in. i forgot it.

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    ive got a few bits to add to it like corner shops for instance. ive been wanting to write it for ages but i was nudged into it partly by rereading ubik in which objects regress in time, (the lift suddenly has an iron grille, brasswork, a lift operator on a stool inside etc)
    and partly from watching this video (which honestly is almost enough to make you cry)

    and gives you a real sense of the stability of the underlying structure, the permanence of it, and the also how the surface layer is always evolving, as demonstrated in Ubik. (those old ticket machines!)
    and partly walking through Bank at night and a film set had replaced the underground sign over the entrance stairs to the station with a much older one, which was a real Ubik thrill.
    and then you know youve got other instances of the same realistion, for instance when the sign on the shop front is removed and you see what it was in 1968 or whatever. so the structure is there, the shop premises, is relatively stable, but it appears in different forms through time. or the stone setts under the asphalt. and of course music does much the same thing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Corpsey View Post
    can you add some pretty pictures and some sort of call to action at the bottom and then i'll be interested
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