CORP$EY
no mickey mouse ting
I only just saw that luka posted all those instagrams... I apologise, I must make time to read them soon
Came in here to talk about eradicating bad habits in my writing, prompted by happening upon this post by yours truly:
'I think this is OTM, insofar as I find it hard to accept that people living in poverty in the UK are not better off than they would be living in poverty in India, say, and that's because I assume they still have access to clean water, heating, and even TVs/phones. It's easy to assume that society as a whole is affluent because of these gizmos (and relative to other countries, the UK is affluent, one assumes).'
'Assumes' is a word I use too much. 'Obviously' is another. Help me napalm my prose style!
Came in here to talk about eradicating bad habits in my writing, prompted by happening upon this post by yours truly:
'I think this is OTM, insofar as I find it hard to accept that people living in poverty in the UK are not better off than they would be living in poverty in India, say, and that's because I assume they still have access to clean water, heating, and even TVs/phones. It's easy to assume that society as a whole is affluent because of these gizmos (and relative to other countries, the UK is affluent, one assumes).'
'Assumes' is a word I use too much. 'Obviously' is another. Help me napalm my prose style!