i don't know what editorial constraints you have but i'd like to see a couple of things. 1) more you. you're funny, you're irreverent, you're not particularly swayed by the consensus (on here at least). take a stand if you feel there's one to be taken. don't emphasise the industry aspects of if you do, show us why that's interesting to you. 2) make it feel it's about something bigger. it's not just a mixtape; it's confirmation that nigerian pit patter is the beating heart of london or that conservative gang culture is about to embark on a codeine induced psychedelic adventure. use the review as an excuse to talk about whatever you want to (reynolds does that a lot).
that's not to say it's not good, i just think you have more potential.