"I gotta take a little timeHave to say that poem does little for me from either a formal or intellectual perspective - which isn't to say that it hasn't got these things to offer, I just am struggling to see it. I'm sure it's altogether too subtle.
To quote Foreigner, 'I want you to show me'.
yesare you looking to have some kind of aesthetic experience like youre a 19th century swooning decadent?
wishyou want it to do something to you? like some kind of hand-job while you passively recline there, pants down, sighing? is that how you think this stuff works?