i think soIs each poem about a different He?
yeah theyre very similar. it wouldnt insist on it. who knows.Cos some of them seem quite similar. That's not a negative. Maybe some poems cover different facets of the same person while others are about someone different. That's how it works for me.
Then again lots of people are similar.yeah theyre very similar. it wouldnt insist on it. who knows.
Monotone and declarative yes, and I also get the sense that, most of the time, when a new sentence begins, it’s as if the focus retracts from the subject of the previous sentence, and is redeployed in a new, somewhat adjacent direction. Sometimes the sentences have some clearer continuity, IE two or three steps being taken in a continuous thread, but most of the time I get more of a sense of a rhythm of step/probe forward, reset/retract, and a step/probe in a new direction.Dunno doesn't seem very jazzy to me, they're all a succession of flat declarative sentences aren't they? Monotonous if anything (not in a bad way, but the style is deliberately monotone)
Yes exactly what I was just trying to type out but in a completely retarded wayMonotone and declarative yes, and I also get the sense that, most of the time, when a new sentence begins, it’s as if the focus retracts from the subject of the previous sentence, and is redeployed in a new, somewhat adjacent direction. Sometimes the sentences have some clearer continuity, IE two or three steps being taken in a continuous thread, but most of the time I get more of a sense of a rhythm of step/probe forward, reset/retract, and a step/probe in a new direction.