WHAT CANNOT BE SPOKEN: study & discussion group

Benny Bunter

Well-known member
i was under mega psychic attack unprecedented attack mind-torture
But it ends kind of positively right? There's a resistance and an equivocal hope in there - next time will be different, and dreaming under the big lights in glory.
 

luka

Well-known member
becuase i work quickly and cos im too lazy to edit and rework theres some duff lines in there as always but the good bits
are so in advance of everyone else that i get angry thinking of how im not mega rich and revered like a living god
 

sus

Moderator
The Writer writes itself, the hand is the signature of Allah, if you look at your hand you will see it spells out His name
 

sus

Moderator
Let the flies come to the wound and drink. Next time will be different.

The roots of all are in common. We are more than we. So many eyes, glittering.

In the supermarket we walk the aisles of plenty dreaming on the hard tiled floors under the big lights in glory.
 

sus

Moderator
@woops why don't you edit lukes poems? You've written so many books so prolifically surely you can help another writer out in his time of need. Also being older and wiser will help give the poems maturity and perspective. You can say, Actually Luke mate. The world isn't like this. It's more like that instead
 

sus

Moderator
The mere threat of Prynne reading Lukes poems might be enough to motivate him to tidy. perhaps on the 1st of each month I should threaten to send JHP a link to a poem, at the end of that same month. Whatever lines are at that url are what he'll see
 
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