luka

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by a strange coincidence the science he studied is what prynnes into, quantum mechanics and geomorphology
 

Benny Bunter

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Read the first few pages of that Concepts and conceptions in poetry essay - brilliant, but I'm gonna stop there and read the Prelude first before carrying on.
 

luka

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just read the extracts he provides and that he is actually talking about. dont be overambitious or youll never get anything done
 

Benny Bunter

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Haha yeah, I know. I just ordered the Norton critical edition that has like 4 different versions as well. (Which to read?) But I'm in no rush.
 

luka

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have you read our prelude thread? craner got realy aggressive and started snarling at me for reading it. he was in a white hot rage.
ive got no idea why it was really weird so i stopped reading it to placate him
 

woops

is not like other people
Look at this incredible but unsigned analysis of Prynne's recent work

When you read through the rhythm is clear and very regular, but maybe we are allowed to read the first two words as an instructions to disregard word order – certainly conjunctions, prepositions, other crucial sentence components are absent, and so is conventional punctuation, rows of 20 tildes mark the start and end of the 20 word stanzas like a checksum primitivist decorative styling.

So making conventional sense is not really what we are attempting – the words are stacked in such a blatantly mockingly arbitrary format, it’s a challenge to reading with the expectation of any meaning, like a multidimensional acrostic or a wordgame from the back of a newspaper, vaguely anachronistic.

Capitals mark each page but they equally resemble the deliberate functional asymmetry of a cartridge or memory card – to show which way is up. Its very playful. The physical format is like a pack of cards or a box of swan vestas, but thin as a credit card or a gift tag, and pocket sized, very lightweight, easily losable, you could probably eat it in no time

As if Prynne has discovered sudoku. The 4 grids can make up a cube if you want, lines can be followed on all sorts of trajectories through 3D revealing magic squares - sections and diagonals form little sequences, possible groups and sets and series that prove to be, like every proper puzzle, full of blind alleys and wrong turns, you think you have caught a trail in the spellings or sounds of successive words, or their meanings or taxonomies, or some other common facet, and it almost fits but then peters out, but you spotted a different route instead and that too turns out not to rhyme properly.

On the way you are treated to little journeys through brief sensations and images, glimpses of a story or a scene, impressions. Narratives that are so simple and multidirectional and ambidextrous, untethered to person or perspective, they lose the restraint of time and space just sort of float freely, set in resin like a snow globe, a little memory box of domestic family life in the early 20th century of UK. Perhaps it is the output of a gigantic computer that has spent a lifetime collating all of humanities cultural output and has just been switched on – its first test report is a quirky cubic combination of cosy quotidian fragments grabbed quite randomly from the Prynne memory bank.

What is the the central word of the piece? I feel there may be deeper geometries to be explored. There is something almost sculptural in the shape of the cube formed by the 4x4x4 groups of 5 letter words bisected by the plane of the 4x4 square of 3letter words.
 
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