The Prose Stylist

Corpsey

bandz ahoy
"(the explosion feels unimpeachably realistic, and yet falls short of viscerally reconciling modern audiences to a horror that recent generations have tried to wish away)"
 

version

Well-known member
Gravity's Rainbow is full of this, where the couple hundred characters seemed like pawns in this sprawling and playfully conspiratorial chessboard theater, where the author's motivation seems to be to drive these characters' stories in order to engender as much colorfully complex content as possible, in order to have more fun material to manipulate with more complex formal techniques - all of which can be read as an artifact of literature's evolution unto postmodernism.

Seems a particularly uncharitable reading of what's going on in the novel. You've reduced a wealth of political and historical content and context to stylistic choices for the sake of style.

It's a book set during WW2 and written during the 60s and 70s dealing with the way individuals are pushed, pulled and used like pawns by technologies, systems and institutions. What you're describing as some sort of indulgent flaw on the part of the author is precisely what he's trying to illustrate. It's not some cynical exercise, he's describing the world as he sees it.

Granted, it's an incredibly pessimistic book, but that was obviously his state of mind at the time, watching the disintegration of whatever he'd hoped the movements of the 60s were going to achieve.
 

Corpsey

bandz ahoy
(on Napoleon)
The film, while technically superb, feels like it wins several battles but doesn’t entirely qualify as a success in terms of the overall war.
 

Clinamenic

Binary & Tweed
Seems a particularly uncharitable reading of what's going on in the novel. You've reduced a wealth of political and historical content and context to stylistic choices for the sake of style.

It's a book set during WW2 and written during the 60s and 70s dealing with the way individuals are pushed, pulled and used like pawns by technologies, systems and institutions. What you're describing as some sort of indulgent flaw on the part of the author is precisely what he's trying to illustrate. It's not some cynical exercise, he's describing the world as he sees it.

Granted, it's an incredibly pessimistic book, but that was obviously his state of mind at the time, watching the disintegration of whatever he'd hoped the movements of the 60s were going to achieve.
Oh yeah I didn't mean to frame this as indulgence or vacuity on behalf of Pynchon, I actually think its an excellent expression of the postmodern zeitgeist in general. I guess I was more calling attention to the fact that characters arcs aren’t really appealing to empathy, at least not in the traditional sense, but are all seemingly treated more as objects, as threads in a larger tapestry. Almost done in a generative sense, which is what I was trying to get at, IE these are all very singular characters, some cartoonishly so, and I think much of the brilliance of the book is what happens to emerge when these characters coexist and collide long enough in the mind of the author.

I definitely think it’s a brilliant book, i just don’t think most of it (maybe with some exceptions like the Pokler bits) was written with the intention of getting the reader to really invest in the characters, pathos-wise.
 

version

Well-known member
"A stylist creates a foreign language in their own language... to burrow a foreign language deep within language and to carry all language to a kind of musical limit. This is what it means to have a style."

 

Clinamenic

Binary & Tweed
"A stylist creates a foreign language in their own language... to burrow a foreign language deep within language and to carry all language to a kind of musical limit. This is what it means to have a style."


Yeah in this sense I didn't get much of a private language vibe from Pynchon (only read Lot 49 and GR), at least not compared to folks like Deleuze or Joyce (just got a copy of the Wake, and looking through it is pretty ridiculous haha, in possibly a great way).
 

mixed_biscuits

_________________________
Yeah in this sense I didn't get much of a private language vibe from Pynchon (only read Lot 49 and GR), at least not compared to folks like Deleuze or Joyce (just got a copy of the Wake, and looking through it is pretty ridiculous haha, in possibly a great way).
ChatGPT is good at Finnegan's Wake style, if you want to translate your website into it. Just realised why there are fewer angry aesthetes: dwindling stocks of testosterone population-wide.
 

IdleRich

IdleRich
Someone mentioned Ellroy, I guess its well known that he developed that style cos he had to cut his word count but he didn't want to change the story so he went back through the whole thing and removed every single word that wasn't absolutely necessary, accidentally creating a brilliant style that I guess is part of what lifted him above other similar neonoir type writers. Though obviously he had the brains to recognise he'd stumbled on something and keep doing it.

I left LA Confidential at my parents and suggested they read it but Dad threw it aside after a few pages complaining about how it was written.
 

IdleRich

IdleRich
I remember thinking that Jesus' Son by Dennis Johnson was beautifully written. I haven't read it for a very long time but it's always stuck in my mind as a kind of beautifully broken yin to Bukowski's crude and ugly yang.
 

IdleRich

IdleRich
John M Harrison as I've said before. Never read a really good book by him but the bits where he decided to really turn it on and just write were spectacular.
 

catalog

Well-known member
John M Harrison as I've said before. Never read a really good book by him but the bits where he decided to really turn it on and just write were spectacular.

Big Mike John just posted on his blog this morning!

 

sus

Moderator
I'm surprised you didn't get anything out of it @luka

It is a profoundly ugly consciousnessportrait, impoverished and partial, but knowingly so, and perhaps trying to expose some pattern in all of us, which is otherwise hidden in the full richness of real consciousness holistic personality
 
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