So I am 20 years old and like to write songs rap has been my favorite since just a kid and like to know what people think

this is kind of an angry song lol but hope y'all like hate is welcomes please comment
"Life hard"
Just so fucking angry at life
Shit hurts so bad like getting stabbed with a knife
Thinking to myself was I meant to be here
Even tho dying is my biggest fear
If I ended it no one would Ben sweat a tear
Try my best to make everyone fuckig happy
But realize sometimes it doesn't work
So I think to myself should I go crazy n pop a perk
Sometime I feel like life needs to end
But than realize the pain I would put into my best friend
Everyone was born for a fucking reason
Whether you like it or not
Someone different every day is fucking shot
Fucking kids bringing guns into their school
Wanting to shoot the pale up cuz they thinks it's cool
I just can't stand the world we live in
We all need to make changes
Like a losing team who can't win
Rip to all the people who die
It's just so fucking hard to just survive
You have to be careful everywhere u go
You wouldn't think so
Got crazy people all around
If you go to the wrong place at the wrong time
Your head could be bleeding on the fucking ground
Got people shooting guns robbing homes
Why can't everyone just leave everyone alone
Just should be fucking happy that your alive
Do what u gotta do to survive
It just sucks that's the hard part
Some people aren't born with a full healthy heart
Uh just wish we can live forever
When do I really wanna die ?
fucking never
Sometimes I wish no one could die
Sometimes I wish I could get wings and just fucking fly
Fly away from all this bullshit
Everyone In this fucking world should fit
No one is perfect not even you or you
Got situations your in where u just don't know what to do
Better be careful with people you fuck wit
Crazy people are just everywhere
Just gotta make sure your full aware
Some people r rich some r poor
It's just not fucking fair
Just want to be happy is that hard to ask for
I guess so when u live in te world like we do
People are so heartless they don't even care about the poor
People caring about drugs more
End up overdosing in the bathroom floor