Murphy
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Should I give my first son the name Lascaux, Carnac, or Zidane
Leaning towards Carnac
Zidane
Should I give my first son the name Lascaux, Carnac, or Zidane
Leaning towards Carnac
Thanks woops do ya reckon I should switch life goals and spend the next few years writing a book length epic poem on von Richthofen I been reading his Wikipedianot bad
My last name is Zuluman so it would be rather silly together, don't you think?Zidane
Thanks woops do ya reckon I should switch life goals and spend the next few years writing a book length epic poem on von Richthofen I been reading his Wikipedia
Douai, Messines,
returning now to Marcke living
in the château of the occupied,
playing with the occupant,
Giving the owner a
pretense of power exercised in
kidnapped furniture and
walled-off wings.
Ricky accumulates trophies
in the foyer and
up the stairs, under the desk
of the stenographer discreetly
buttoning her collar.
Too flatCritique this verse @luka gimme aural feedback the cadence the sound of the words the images I don't know how to tell good poetry from bad in any rigorous way
What's a good example of something always on its toesTry and get that sense of being always on your toes
Pivot more. modulate the length of the line more.
If you are going to be arch, be arch. Be a smirking courtier