J. H. Prynne

[luka]

Snooty Tip Offs is in rhyming couplets apparently

 

[luka]

Ever the cats whisker
Will ever make it friskier

 

[luka]

Lots of rats and cats frogs and logs I hear

 

[woops]

Lots of rats and cats frogs and logs I hear

It must be a wind up

 

[luka]

Might be for children?

 

[luka]

The cover reminds me of Alan Ahlberg's Funny Bones

 

[luka]

I know you weren't allowed books as a child so here

 

[woops]

I know you weren't allowed books as a child so here

That picture reminds of why the books were banned

 

[william_kent]

this does nothing to erase my suspicion that it is an attempt at having an award winning west end musical with score by Andrew Lloyd Webber

 

[luka]

this does nothing to erase my suspicion that it is an attempt at having an award winning west end musical with score by Andrew Lloyd Webber

This is poem 16


Strawberry jam, get a sun-tan
indoor or out there’s never much doubt
for very if ever, when chewing a bun
regret either ever, and now it’s all done.

 

[luka]

13

Plink plank plunk, close to nearly sunk,
under the wave if strong to save;
both will promise and will amaze,
dink dank dunk, package of junk.

 

[version]

Dreadful.

 

[william_kent]

conjures images of some precocious brat caterwauling away on Blue Peter ( or whatever the modern day equivalent is )

 

[luka]

They don't even really scan lol

 

[version]

The old man's lost it.

 

[luka]

Maybe he's trolling his publishers that would be good

 

[luka]

 

[luka]

That's the new memory working I picked up yesterday

 

[luka]

 

[woops]

what the fuck jeremy

that travellers tales (a) and (b) are also in that aphtohtherjsme book.