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Can turn naughty
I think Prynne would be amused at that
Its because I think Prynne is having fun with words that it warrants that approachI think he's having fun with words
I'm not sure. The image I have is of metal being forced out of the ground, but why would the field sprout metal in desire for water?This, on the other hand, does seem to have a signal, and I just can't figure it out. A different kind of uncertainty, perhaps.
What does it mean to you?
Yeah, I do. I'm not sure how to avoid that though. Some things you just have to work at, like @Linebaugh said with the Nietzsche burger.Before we move on this, do you see a problem with letting the text become a tyrannical mystery? That is, feeling pressure to understand it, to receive its however-abstract message?
Sometimes it feels like the easiest times I have with this stuff is when it just effortlessly happens, so effortless its as if we can appreciate the trouble gone through to send the message, and appreciate why the trouble is usually warranted.
Beginning to sense a tyrannical mystery here, so I wanted your thoughts on how to proceed.
No water.But how could a field fall apart?
That adds up, but then why draw attention to the builtness and unbuilding of the field, especially when the nail has not only connotations of building, but of manmade building?No water.
I can't remember where, but I read something a while back where they were discussing the line breaks. He'd end lines with words about falling or whatever and the final word would fall onto and start the next line.I dont buy the washing over method with this stuff. In all my expereince with poetry this cryptic, your not really reading it until you take a very meta approach- grouping up like minded words, counting syllables, listing possible definitions and etc.
Not that you completely remove the wash effect - 'So were intern attach herded for ' feels great- but I just think its minor
It's from Capitalist Realism,Niezsche burger?
The group is Dissensus.OR the group investigates the sound as a unit (no matter broke) because without cooperation they will fail to peel back the layers of the situation, the tropic layers at a cellular level, thorough investigation