luka

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this is Science Sam
 

luka

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RADIANT IN MOMENT

Just beyond first gaze could now be seen
almost, among the leaves barely moving
in the light breeze, the playful scatter
of reflections in answer, each to other.
Here pause with scant reason, stay quiet,
such a cloud or so in the sky; in patience,
expectancy, what arrives is itself, eyes
familiar with occasion, small sounds as
fingers of visitation from the air currents
open the view to thought's slim inwardness;
coming forward to meet the certain moment
close to competition. Then will be known
what has been known oft before, repeating
its sufficient truth, to be seen fully, and
understood: fortune in fire beyond desire.
i like this one a lot its from otherhood imminent profusion
 

Benny Bunter

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Been reading and really enjoying the White Stones today, especially that little run of Break It, Against Hurt and Moon Poem. And The Glacial Question, Unsolved is amazing!
Was thinking it'd be worth going over them again and make a list of all the words that keep recurring and a few notes - as mystifying as it all is, it's clearly a very coherent collection with a sustained mood that I reckon will repay spending time on.

Got up to Aristeas, which I plan to read more thoroughly tomorrow morning along with the notes Luka posted here in the thread, cos it's longer and I think it's gonna be a special one.

Also flicked forward to read a little bit of the Notes on metal essay, and it looks like reading that properly might unlock a lot of the meaning of this book - the word 'quality' crops up quite a lot in the poems in a way I can't quite get my head round, and I see he talks about that in the essay.
 
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Benny Bunter

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Strong links to a previous poem in the book, Frost and Snow, Falling.

This might be worth a read:

"One of the poems in The White Stones is based on the story of a mediaeval missionary to China printed in a book edited by the historian Christopher Dawson. Dawson was also a friend of David Jones from the 1920s on, and one of the 50 influences cited by him in the introduction to The Anathemata.
The book is The Mongol Missions and it was published in 1955."

 

Benny Bunter

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Apologies for shitting up the thread with a load of links that I haven't even read properly myself yet, btw. I'm just curious to see if going in deep on glacial question, Aristeas and notes on metal will help with understanding the first half of the book, which is very cryptic, or whether it is a book of two more or less unconnected halves, as proposed earlier in the thread. I'm not sure about that yet.
 
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