luka
Well-known member
dissensus hates poetry. its very frustratingDammit I tried to add spaces or tabbed indents so the lines jutted out diagnoal but Dissensus removes them
dissensus hates poetry. its very frustratingDammit I tried to add spaces or tabbed indents so the lines jutted out diagnoal but Dissensus removes them
we talked about this re: 4chan. A whole culture built around hiding your tics and revealing/ridiculing those in othersit must be painful, someone drawing attention to or ridiculing your whole thing. I don’t think that’s what luke is doing because he couldn’t adequately emulate but he’s very perceptive and that makes you nervous
i can see the formatting when i quote it strangely. i dont think i would slap down words likePing
pang
poof
A sudden expanding in your—
Lungs.
chaos prediction adjunct arrival yesterday's
supper pinches of
salt
Amber of
heart-valve, contracting in
antiquarian
quiet
Pay attention now. Something is on a precipice of
poetry
I get a similar sense from Gravity's Rainbow, a lot of complex and sophisticated form with little to justify its complexity, in terms of substance.I think if you are searching for the things we are searching for, out on the fringes and whatnot, there is something of a low density of value in the discourse we churn out.
It was a sloppy imitation but it took me 1 minute and was done from memory, purely for laughs, so you have to grade it on a curvei can see the formatting when i quote it strangely. i dont think i would slap down words like
lungs
and
salt
particularly after a pregnant pause in that way. it's a bit unnatural, a bit theatrical.
Smh he sneers at what others find good, yet provides no plausible alternative value system only pure cynicism and nihilism, no kind of leader at all. Go watch Knightriders and come back when you're a better king
do you think there's a form? it mostly seems to dissolveI get a similar sense from Gravity's Rainbow, a lot of complex and sophisticated form with little to justify its complexity, in terms of substance.
But again I think, as far as theory is concerned, that pretentious form is sometimes justified by potent and hard-won insights, insights that wouldn't dawn on those who don't venture into complex form.
he was slagging me off, not youGus you would have been banned on 555-5555 after your 2nd post, bitch please.
we talked about this re: 4chan. A whole culture built around hiding your tics and revealing/ridiculing those in others
Sometimes I wish I was more committed and sincereshiels has a slippery style. think its very dependent on his mood and what he's had to eat that day
you are a lot of the timeSometimes I wish I was more committed and sincere
Ladculture in general has this limiting policing mechanism... a bit of a language prison
If the riff can be considered a form. In a way its arguably the ultimate postmodern form, but then again stream of consciousness is a sort of riff.do you think there's a form? it mostly seems to dissolve